POP GOES LUISA*

All around the city streets
Luisa chased the bargains;
The market thought ’twas all in fun,
But, NOT for Luisa.

She pushed and shoved and found her way
A sale on every corner
That’s the way her money goes,
Go faster now …Luisa.

Her husband tried to stop her flight
But all her got was fury
That’s the way the story goes
NO MORE husband for poor Luisa.

Song to the melody of “Pop Goes the Weasel”

Sorry if this is weird,
It just POPPED into my head, and I had to post it.

50 Responses

  1. Hahahaha…weird is EXCELLENT.
    what an adorable picture and I love your creation to” Pop Goes the Weasel” …
    Have you a great weekend, Doraz!
    You are such a Darling.
    hugs
    shakira

  2. I love it! I love it! I love it! Viola cheered.
    No way is funny Luisa acting weird.
    Her funny humor knocks my socks off.
    She makes me laugh until I cough.
    Funny Luisa brings sunshine into my day.
    And I thank God for her every time I pray.

  3. Glad to see you poem,
    lovely humors!

  4. Luisa!!!

    I am so GLAD it’s weird! I LOVE it!

    You are such a talented and fun person.

    POP goes Jannie to another blog now…

    xo

  5. Wonderful stuff! Lusia…hahahaha! 🙂

    Thank you dear for all you do
    you make the days pass faster,
    and I can see you love to shop,
    at that you are the master! 🙂

    All the stalls are on your way
    offering bargains all the day,
    shopkeepers bow and shout
    “make way” let Lusia
    spend much faster!”

    Lusia, you bring so much into my life
    with all your fun and humor,
    I hear that you are meeting me
    …but maybe this a rumor? lol 🙂

    I love you and all you do,
    now that, my dear,
    is totally true! 🙂

    Lusia my lovely friend – You Rock!

    John, 😉
    🙂

    • ps: come over when you have time to share the wonderful word of suzy sparkle
      at my page http://poettraveler.wordpress.com/2010/06/05/suzy-sparkle-went-out-one-day/

      John 🙂

    • John….I have just gotten home from a lovely day at a baby shower. Such fun. 🙂 I just LOVE you when you do your special poems for me…I truly feel soooo special. I send you a big hug and kiss from CA. lol 🙂

      • Me sends you back a biggg hug and a kiss from England. Tomorrow I will have gotten nearer to CA, lol, because I will be on the island of Cuba at an awesome location for the next two weeks and I’ll be waving at Miami and from there I got no doubt someone will see my waving and say “heyyyy, it’s that crazy english guy waving at Luisa – we’ll catch the wave (lol) and pass it on to CA for her to see it ! ” 🙂

  6. tee hee.. I laffed so much I mispelt your name..doh…sowwwy! 😉

  7. Luisa, Weird – no I don’t think so! But wonderful !! – yes!
    Thank you – I saw you chasing after all these bargains, the one after the other! 🙂
    And enjoy your weekend!
    Jan 🙂

  8. “Luisa did things her way and she had a very good day” And loads of fun this is a really good one,and so funny. Have a tremendous day Doraz 😀 😀

  9. yikes. i just get out of the way on shopping trips…lol.

  10. Your poem was so cute! Loved it. What a great strategy! Maybe I need to try it 🙂

  11. bah humbug everything is bad for us, except u xxx

  12. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/06/lets-send-love-2-viola-and-ibok-today/

    Please help send hugs and good wishes to Viola and Ibok…
    thanks a ton!
    🙂

  13. GO,GET IT LUISA

    ALL GOOD THINGS MAY NOT BE GOOD FOR EVERYBODY BUT ALL BAD THINGS ARE BAD FOR EVERYBODY .

  14. Thanks for another smile at the end of my week…always know where to go to find that hidden laugh.

  15. Ha Ha very good. You confirmed my suspicions that nothing gets between a woman & a bargain

  16. never stop doing wierd.
    I like it

  17. If you smile when no one else is around, you really mean it. ~Andy Rooney

    I read this today and the first person that came into my mind was Luisa aka Doraz !! I wonder why?
    Jan 🙂

  18. ironic one. but very witty. thanks for sharing.

    you truly fill up our days with smile.

  19. It’s fun to read it while humming the song!
    Happy Sunday to ya 🙂

  20. busy at home,
    have fun!
    See you next time!
    😉

  21. You did well with this one Doraz.

    Isn’t a blog fun–we can write whatever jumps into our minds…

  22. well looky here william has competition lol, excellent as always xx

  23. your choice of cartoons is too good. 🙂

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