Stop Chasing Me*

Twisting in all directions
Looking for a way out
I can not seem to find it
Where is all the help when I need it

Have I been forgotten
Have all my memories been erased
Why are you chasing after me
What did I ever do to deserve such a treatment

Go away
Let me sleep in peace
I need to have a smile… not a frown
Back off….I do not want you around anymore
Are you gone
AT LAST

I awake in happiness

25 Responses

  1. That’s pretty “deep” Luisa. I hope there is nobody in your life you would like gone. 😦

  2. No, I just thought of this because I have been having strange dreams lately. I think I am eating foods for dinner that set them off! LOL 🙂

  3. Perfect description of a bad dream!

  4. I love it. To me, deep = awesome.

  5. Yeah, I agree. This is very deep. Hope all is well with you.

  6. I’ve been having weird dreams too! Do you ever try to wake up and tell yourself to change the dream? Sometimes it works. 🙂

    • You know, I have tried that. I also have tried telling myself in the morning, and repeating the thought…throughout the day, every few hours….what I am going to dream about that night. It is strange, but that does work! I guess my brain heard it said sooo many times, it went on auto pilot! You try it and let me know if it works for you!

  7. WOW WISH I HAD THOUGHT OF THAT MAYBE SOME OF MY BAD DREAMS WOULD GO AWAY!

  8. You write really beautiful poetry Miss Doraz I love it… It describes those irritating dreams we all wanna escape.
    You’re funny and you’re a great writer.

  9. you know when you’re not busy telling blonde jokes.
    You write decent poetry. lol
    More please.
    But no less blonde jokes either

  10. This one touched my heart.
    Thank you,Doraz! 🙂
    I’m glad that isn’t real what you wrote 🙂

    Take care!

  11. nicely weaved words out here..! love it… !

  12. It doesn’t sound so bad. It sounds like you are looking for a path of transition. Those we have to determine alone. If you awake happy then it sounds like you found it. 🙂

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