I SEE YOU*….. a poem I wrote

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Hiding behind your friends
will not make you invisible
it will only make you more transparent
for the ugliness will prevail
it can only be sustained for a
short period of time
before it zooms off into
the saddened hearts of those it touches

Believe in Yourself;
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Luisa Doraz

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12 Responses

  1. Nice poem but I’m not sure if it’s supposed to be sad or not…

  2. Have you had an experience with someone lately? It sounds very deep.

  3. HOW CAN I HIDE BEHIND AN EVER SMILING PERSON.

  4. Kinda unrelated, I had lots of friends but now I have two and they’re the best any one would ask for……………………

    Beautiful reminder, thank you.

  5. there’s nowhere to hide
    ever at all. nope. zip. zilch.
    transparent always…

    Poignantcy You serve for breakfast!!! Zounds!!! I agree, I agree, I agree.

    Sending You Much Love and Light. Thank You and Cheers and Namaste. šŸ™‚

  6. I try to pick the books off the shelves that I believe to be the best! šŸ™‚ We sometimes miss things, huh? šŸ™‚

  7. Sorry so late getting here, this is a very good message for those that can relate.

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